Thursday, 09 August 2007

  • Carving Beauty

    Take the knife
    Cut it deep
    Bury your hopes and dreams

    The incision made so perfectly
    Remove the sorrow
    Rebuild your vessel
    Paint it in your vision

    As the blood runs through
    Sip the poison
    To see yourself
    Once and for all

    Be happy
    For after such a surgery
    Beauty shall be yours
    Such is the only outcome
    When you're a monster such as me

Comments (2)

  • WiZeMaN305
    The poem is amazing I can feel the sorrow in you words. I dont agree with it at all though, you are no where near monsterous. I think you are beautiful, even if most people tend to turn a blind eye to your beauty you shouldnt let it get to you. I still wish you could see yourself through my eyes and realize you arent the monster you make yourself out to be, you are beautiful and shouldnt let people tell you otherwise, nor should you feel so badly about yourself.
  • Brokenandstained

    I feel you, It is what I think about some times as I lie in bed trying to fall asleep.  It is hadr not to think of such things honestly.  No matter who you are you will always judge and be judged boy others on outwards apearance.  Its a cold reverberation.  I am glad to see your poetic side resurface, I love these dark, thoughtfull poems.  think of Aki on a mountin of plushies.  Untill the next.

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